man and woman in the park

man and woman in the park

Man:

. A bright day it is today and I am having a great day at work so far. I could barely wait to close for the day and rush home to hug my beautiful wife.

A colleague asked me what the date is.
“the 24th of September”, I replied.

Then suddenly, it dawned on me. Today marks my late father’s birthday.
How on earth did I even forget what date today is?

As loving memories of him came flooding back, my smile slowly faded.

“I miss you dad!” I cried

I knew I needed my wife’s hug rather sooner than I thought.

Woman:
. The sun was still shining outside when my hubby came back home. I was packing the picnic basket when he walked in sluggishly, wearing that sunken sad face I so much dreaded.

Oh no! He must have found out I erased the reminders on his phone. I intentionally woke him up this morning so he wouldn’t have to check the date from our digital alarm clock.

I like him when he is cheerful; but -on days like this- when he sulks, he is worse than a kid! I have to cheer him up somehow…

I knew something like this is bound to happen today, that’s why I already packed a picnic.

But first, its gonna be a herculean task to convince him to come to the park on a picnic with me on a day like this!

Old Woman:
On a bright and beautiful day like this; I would give anything to sit. and have a picnic with my loved ones under the shade of a tree in a park.

But I was in the park all alone. I don’t understand why people don’t care for their aged ones these days… I wonder what the world is turning into!

I held onto my only companions (my crochet and yarn) as I settled down in a spot close to a cute couple having a picnic.

Oh! How I miss my husband on days like this!

I brought out the knitted napkin my husband had bought me few days before his demise and placed it on my laps. Then I started knitting something similar to give to my grand children.

The couple beside me were holding hands and I could hear the man telling the woman of how his late father used to personally knit sweaters for him.

“How adorable”, I thought!

“…and what a perfect couple!” I wanted to say when I spotted something odd!

The man was crying! He was practically blubbering like a child and the woman was petting him like she were his mother!

Is this not supposed to be vice-versa?!

This is arrant nonsense! Gentlemen don’t cry in our days.

…What is this world turning to?…

PS: this post was inspired by Writing 101 prompt: “write a scene at the
park… Write the scene from
three different points of view.

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Prince A. T. ™

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20 responses to “a day like this in 3D”

  1. Having had no idea how to tackle this prompt I clicked on a random comment which was your link. How pleased I was. I still am unsure how to tackle it but enjoyed the moment I was in, reading yours…thank you for sharing this piece.

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    1. Thanks… You’re welcome & thank you too ☺

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  2. I liked the way you have described each role in the story!! that together makes it worth reading it!!!
    kept it up!!!!

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    1. Thanks Jesalshah… I must confess it wasn’t easy creating a plot and trying to tell and view it from each character’s perspective… But it definitely was worth it!

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  3. wow, this is really beautiful. You are very inspiring. thank you so much for this beautiful perspective.

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    1. You are welcome
      …and thank you very much for the encouragement

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    You did something really cool with the timing of this story. Instead of seeing the same scene from three points of view, you wrote three mini-stories that overlap and tell one complete story. I don’t need to tell you what you did, but I had to type that out so that I understand what you did. I would not have thought to do that…well done. The old woman’s twist at the end was a surprise. Be careful with your verb tense…it jumps a bit (totally understandable considering what you tackled with this piece).

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    1. Thanks for the observations!
      I’ll work on it!

      I am glad you stopped by, thank you! ☺

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  5. I enjoyed reading your thoughtful full of heart story, I feel you could become a writer of books… I would buy and read them.

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    1. A writer? That’s a big!… I prefer to say I am a scribbler for now, ☺
      … I’ll get there someday, after I perfect my slow shaky baby steps… *smiles*

      And Hey, thank you, thank you, and thank you so very much!
      …I’m jotting down your name as a potential buyer of my book!

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      1. When you write that book let me know …

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        1. Don’t doubt it, I will surely do that! Thanks. ☺

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  6. Oh! I like such short stories, picturesque yet crisp and it ends 🙂 leaving you to your thoughts O-O

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    1. … Thanks Poodle

      I believe fiction is at its best when the reader’s imagination is given a chance to connect the dots!

      I’m glad you like it. ☺

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  7. This was nice to see, from different perspectives..
    Men don’t cry yeah? Lol

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    1. “Yeah! Men don’t cry!” that’s my grandma’s believe… ☺
      But I do shed tears o, esp when watching some tear jacking films!

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      1. Well, tis nice to see a man admit in public that he cries..just don’t let your grandma hear you say that. lol

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        1. Haha! *covers mouth & whispers* ‘pls don’t tell my grandma…please!
          lol… ☺

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